25th June 2003, 5:16 PM
My thoughts? I could do better, that's what I think! :p
How about this:
A fierce wind blew across the black sand desert. The mysterious wanderer pulled his cloak tighter around his face. His past haunted him like restless spirits. Blood and gunpowder and the dead were the only things he left in his wake. Death and destruction were second nature to him. Those who stood in his path were doomed to failure. His quick-draw was unmatched among this desolate wasteland. He glanced up to at the distant horizen. He could see the shape of a man at the top the next hill. He knew without a doubt that this was the man he had been searching so long for. The man he had sworn to kill!
How about this:
A fierce wind blew across the black sand desert. The mysterious wanderer pulled his cloak tighter around his face. His past haunted him like restless spirits. Blood and gunpowder and the dead were the only things he left in his wake. Death and destruction were second nature to him. Those who stood in his path were doomed to failure. His quick-draw was unmatched among this desolate wasteland. He glanced up to at the distant horizen. He could see the shape of a man at the top the next hill. He knew without a doubt that this was the man he had been searching so long for. The man he had sworn to kill!
Sometimes you get the scorpion.