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    5th January 2006, 3:25 PM
    I don't want to be too harsh, but I'm afraid both do sound a tad "done before".

    Also, it may just be me, but the idea of "surprise, we're related" doesn't seem all that amazing to me. To me, a long lost relative is still a total stranger. Just because the past connects in a purely scientific way doesn't mean I suddenly have to have some emotional investment in such a person.
    "On two occasions, I have been asked [by members of Parliament], 'Pray, Mr. Babbage, if you put into the machine wrong figures, will the right answers come out?' I am not able to rightly apprehend the kind of confusion of ideas that could provoke such a question." ~ Charles Babbage (1791-1871)
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    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 4th January 2006, 5:59 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 4th January 2006, 6:28 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 4th January 2006, 7:10 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 5th January 2006, 7:53 AM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 5th January 2006, 8:14 AM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by The Former DMiller - 5th January 2006, 9:56 AM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 5th January 2006, 10:40 AM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by The Former DMiller - 5th January 2006, 1:45 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 5th January 2006, 3:17 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Dark Jaguar - 5th January 2006, 3:25 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 5th January 2006, 3:54 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 5th January 2006, 6:44 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 5th January 2006, 7:33 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Darunia - 6th January 2006, 5:03 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 6th January 2006, 6:17 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Darunia - 8th January 2006, 7:18 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 8th January 2006, 7:39 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Dark Jaguar - 8th January 2006, 9:42 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 8th January 2006, 9:55 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 8th January 2006, 9:55 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 8th January 2006, 10:04 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 9th January 2006, 1:26 AM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 9th January 2006, 8:26 AM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Dark Jaguar - 9th January 2006, 11:13 AM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 9th January 2006, 11:34 AM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 9th January 2006, 12:05 PM
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    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Smoke - 10th March 2006, 8:37 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 10th March 2006, 8:48 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 17th March 2006, 7:04 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by The Former DMiller - 18th March 2006, 4:17 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 19th March 2006, 4:39 PM
    Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by The Former DMiller - 24th March 2006, 3:11 PM
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