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5th January 2006, 9:56 AM

The sibling twist would be good if done right. You need to write it so it isn't obvious that the story is going that way. If it is too obvious that they are siblings it would ruin the surprise.

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Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 4th January 2006, 5:59 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 4th January 2006, 6:28 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 4th January 2006, 7:10 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 5th January 2006, 7:53 AM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 5th January 2006, 8:14 AM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by The Former DMiller - 5th January 2006, 9:56 AM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 5th January 2006, 10:40 AM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by The Former DMiller - 5th January 2006, 1:45 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 5th January 2006, 3:17 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Dark Jaguar - 5th January 2006, 3:25 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 5th January 2006, 3:54 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 5th January 2006, 6:44 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 5th January 2006, 7:33 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Darunia - 6th January 2006, 5:03 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 6th January 2006, 6:17 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Darunia - 8th January 2006, 7:18 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 8th January 2006, 7:39 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Dark Jaguar - 8th January 2006, 9:42 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 8th January 2006, 9:55 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 8th January 2006, 9:55 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 8th January 2006, 10:04 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 9th January 2006, 1:26 AM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 9th January 2006, 8:26 AM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Dark Jaguar - 9th January 2006, 11:13 AM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by lazyfatbum - 9th January 2006, 11:34 AM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 9th January 2006, 12:05 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 10th March 2006, 8:20 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Smoke - 10th March 2006, 8:37 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 10th March 2006, 8:48 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 17th March 2006, 7:04 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by The Former DMiller - 18th March 2006, 4:17 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 19th March 2006, 4:39 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by The Former DMiller - 24th March 2006, 3:11 PM

Looking for a little advice with a story I'm writing - by Great Rumbler - 24th March 2006, 4:10 PM

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