17th July 2006, 7:01 PM
Okay, so it looks like I lied a little bit. Chapter 13 is completed and yet Part 1 still marches onward. I thought Chapter 12 would be enough to finish out, but once I started writing things it quickly expanded beyond what I thought it would be. I think it's a really good chapter, it has humor in the first part, some good dialog with some backstory for several characters [though mainly for Kara], and the description of leaving the Earth is quite vivid [I think]. More than likely though I'll expand some of this later, but it's complete for time being. Anyway, Chapter 13 is now up for viewing, for those who care.
Which part?
Quote:think about what you just said.
Which part?
Sometimes you get the scorpion.