14th July 2006, 2:02 PM
http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?sto...chapter=12
I went on a writing frenzy today and I was able to complete Chapter 11 in about two hours time, with thirty minutes or so for fixing grammar and spelling mistakes.
Kara and Aaron begin their exploration of the underground city after the revelation about Kara's past. There's some brooding on Aaron's part and some realization of purpose on Kara's part, which basically sets the course for their future.
The Foggers makes a return in this chapter, although it's much more sinister. The powers that be are no longer passive and are now taking direct action in the lives of our protagonists.
Now, reply to my thread or I shall be very cross with you guys!
I went on a writing frenzy today and I was able to complete Chapter 11 in about two hours time, with thirty minutes or so for fixing grammar and spelling mistakes.
Kara and Aaron begin their exploration of the underground city after the revelation about Kara's past. There's some brooding on Aaron's part and some realization of purpose on Kara's part, which basically sets the course for their future.
The Foggers makes a return in this chapter, although it's much more sinister. The powers that be are no longer passive and are now taking direct action in the lives of our protagonists.
Now, reply to my thread or I shall be very cross with you guys!
Sometimes you get the scorpion.