12th July 2006, 10:53 AM
(This post was last modified: 12th July 2006, 1:46 PM by Great Rumbler.)
Well, the rewrite is finally finished and I must say that it was by far the best thing that's happened to this story since I started. It's really come together and the focus of the story has become a lot more clear. Also, I think it's a lot more interesting and well written than it ever was before. More than likely it'll get another rewrite sometime, but Part 1 of the book is more or less finished.
I also finished up Chapter 10, which delves into the past of our female protagonist more so than any other chapter. It's a twist!! But it really doesn't change the story all THAT much. Give it a read and feel free to tell me what you thought about it. Or...just completely ignore it...
Also, the events in Chapter 10 were originally intended to the end of the story, but now it's closer to the half-way point.
I also finished up Chapter 10, which delves into the past of our female protagonist more so than any other chapter. It's a twist!! But it really doesn't change the story all THAT much. Give it a read and feel free to tell me what you thought about it. Or...just completely ignore it...
Also, the events in Chapter 10 were originally intended to the end of the story, but now it's closer to the half-way point.
Sometimes you get the scorpion.