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    15th December 2004, 9:51 PM (This post was last modified: 15th December 2004, 10:31 PM by Weltall.)
    I've read about half of Grumbler's story. I didn't know you were such a proficient writer!

    Good stuff. Love the narratives. The constantly-jumping perspective is really confusing though. It's your story ultimately, but I recommend a single perspective. It's a wonderful idea though. I'll read the rest tomorrow, and take a look at some of your others also.

    ABF: I'm not blaming either of you, but it's getting to be really disruptive. Both of you continue it, and both of you insist on having the last word. Regardless of who starts these fights, both of you have the capacity to be the bigger man and walk away. Don't take what I said as a threat, because what you're doing isn't dangerous. But it got to me here because this is probably my favorite thread on the board and it's a topic I love to discuss.

    It's also not because you didn't care for my story. I don't expect everyone to like it, and even I have serious questions about how good it is right now. (though, I do have two new ones, and you're more than welcome to see if they strike your fancy.. though they are along similar lines. I write what I know :D)

    (just for you, ABF, I formatted the fantasy story I've been working on, off and on, for about seven years.)
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    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 18th November 2003, 8:31 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Laser Link - 19th November 2003, 12:15 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 19th November 2003, 1:13 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 19th November 2003, 6:41 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 19th November 2003, 7:52 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Fittisize - 20th November 2003, 11:01 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 20th November 2003, 1:34 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 20th November 2003, 1:49 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 20th November 2003, 1:53 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 20th November 2003, 1:56 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 20th November 2003, 2:12 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 20th November 2003, 2:27 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 20th November 2003, 3:06 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Fittisize - 20th November 2003, 5:53 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 22nd November 2003, 12:10 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Darunia - 23rd November 2003, 7:44 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Fittisize - 23rd November 2003, 8:30 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 24th November 2003, 3:22 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 24th November 2003, 9:21 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Fittisize - 24th November 2003, 11:20 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Darunia - 24th November 2003, 1:24 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by alien space marine - 24th November 2003, 1:53 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by A Black Falcon - 24th November 2003, 1:57 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by alien space marine - 24th November 2003, 2:02 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 24th November 2003, 2:19 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by A Black Falcon - 24th November 2003, 2:30 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 24th November 2003, 3:10 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by alien space marine - 24th November 2003, 4:25 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Fittisize - 24th November 2003, 5:05 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by A Black Falcon - 24th November 2003, 7:48 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 25th November 2003, 3:02 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 22nd August 2004, 7:21 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 23rd August 2004, 1:08 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 13th December 2004, 3:48 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 13th December 2004, 3:52 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 13th December 2004, 4:02 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 13th December 2004, 4:06 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 13th December 2004, 4:15 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 13th December 2004, 4:34 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Geno - 13th December 2004, 5:43 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 13th December 2004, 8:11 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 13th December 2004, 9:31 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by lazyfatbum - 14th December 2004, 2:23 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 14th December 2004, 12:35 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 14th December 2004, 2:23 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 14th December 2004, 2:25 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 14th December 2004, 2:34 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Darunia - 15th December 2004, 9:56 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by lazyfatbum - 15th December 2004, 10:49 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 15th December 2004, 7:26 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by A Black Falcon - 15th December 2004, 8:30 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 15th December 2004, 9:51 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by A Black Falcon - 16th December 2004, 11:35 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 16th December 2004, 3:45 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 16th December 2004, 7:43 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 16th December 2004, 8:20 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 17th December 2004, 1:08 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 17th December 2004, 3:07 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 17th December 2004, 3:27 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by A Black Falcon - 19th December 2004, 7:29 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 19th December 2004, 7:50 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by A Black Falcon - 19th December 2004, 8:51 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 20th December 2004, 7:39 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 20th December 2004, 7:47 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 25th January 2005, 7:21 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 25th January 2005, 8:29 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Darunia - 29th January 2005, 5:34 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 29th January 2005, 8:51 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 30th January 2005, 10:45 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 30th January 2005, 11:51 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 30th January 2005, 11:57 AM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by A Black Falcon - 30th January 2005, 12:49 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 30th January 2005, 1:12 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 30th January 2005, 2:01 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 30th January 2005, 2:28 PM
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    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 30th January 2005, 2:56 PM
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    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 30th January 2005, 3:26 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 30th January 2005, 3:40 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 30th January 2005, 6:02 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 30th January 2005, 6:05 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 30th January 2005, 6:12 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 30th January 2005, 6:17 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 30th January 2005, 7:02 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 30th January 2005, 7:56 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 30th January 2005, 10:05 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Weltall - 30th January 2005, 10:15 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 31st January 2005, 2:04 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 31st January 2005, 2:38 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 31st January 2005, 2:43 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 31st January 2005, 2:48 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 31st January 2005, 2:55 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by Great Rumbler - 31st January 2005, 3:04 PM
    Writing a book, writing a book, writing a book - by OB1 - 31st January 2005, 3:11 PM

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