13th December 2004, 9:31 PM
(This post was last modified: 13th December 2004, 9:45 PM by Weltall.)
Definitely going to read it, Grumb.
My original story seems to be derailed by writer's block, but I have two new stories that I think are more exciting, plus I have a clearer idea of how to conclude both.
"Night Terrors" is about a man named Ben Ramsey, whose life is in the tank since his son died, and his wife divorced him, and he's depressed and lonely. He starts having vicious, terrifying nightmares that become more complex every night. He starts to think they might be a message from his dead son... or someone else.
"When You Wake Up" is about a woman named Sarah Callahan. She's very successful, and has everything she ever really wanted in life: A loving family, financial success, the works. Twenty years ago she suffered a coma, and her life has been on the ups ever since. But she notices more and more that she has trouble remembering things, and she notices that some things are becoming increasingly wrong... changing. She encounters beings she calls Dark Men, who at first only she can see, and only intimidate her. Quickly, things get worse as the Dark Men turn violent, people she knows and love can no longer be trusted, and her world begins to unravel around her. She begins to suspect that her coma twenty years ago has something to do with it, but can she learn the truth before she loses her mind, or her life?
My original story seems to be derailed by writer's block, but I have two new stories that I think are more exciting, plus I have a clearer idea of how to conclude both.
"Night Terrors" is about a man named Ben Ramsey, whose life is in the tank since his son died, and his wife divorced him, and he's depressed and lonely. He starts having vicious, terrifying nightmares that become more complex every night. He starts to think they might be a message from his dead son... or someone else.
"When You Wake Up" is about a woman named Sarah Callahan. She's very successful, and has everything she ever really wanted in life: A loving family, financial success, the works. Twenty years ago she suffered a coma, and her life has been on the ups ever since. But she notices more and more that she has trouble remembering things, and she notices that some things are becoming increasingly wrong... changing. She encounters beings she calls Dark Men, who at first only she can see, and only intimidate her. Quickly, things get worse as the Dark Men turn violent, people she knows and love can no longer be trusted, and her world begins to unravel around her. She begins to suspect that her coma twenty years ago has something to do with it, but can she learn the truth before she loses her mind, or her life?
YOU CANNOT HIDE FOREVER
WE STAND AT THE DOOR
WE STAND AT THE DOOR