That shit ploded!

[etoven]

Ie, my latest WIP render...
Critique's needed...

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[A Black Falcon]

I like it, good stuff. :)

[Great Rumbler]

Why did it splode? :(

[etoven]

Why did it splode? :(

I guess you have to see the whole script, that's only a partial scene render, I think you'll get it when you see the whole thing. I'll post it when it's done. :)

So for now, do you guys have any suggestions?

[Great Rumbler]

Only thing I really noticed was that the truck sort of looks like it "slides" to the left a little bit as its coming over the rock, doesn't quite look natural.

[etoven]

Here is my latest..
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