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    #1
    4th December 2011, 10:49 AM
    Any feedback about this would be appreciated.. I'm not sure I like the colors.
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    #2
    4th December 2011, 3:19 PM
    Made some revisions to the Video..

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    #3
    4th December 2011, 3:56 PM
    Second video looks better.
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    4th December 2011, 7:28 PM
    I agree, the second one is better.
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    #5
    5th December 2011, 5:24 AM
    I like it, though I'd shorten it to make it more succinct. Also, I don't know if this is an optical illusion or what, but those gears look like they're pausing every so often. Still, good work.

    And yeah, the 2nd one is better.
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    #6
    5th December 2011, 10:34 AM
    You should synchronize the speed of the gears to the sound of the revving engine.

    And also use a font that isn't obviously Harry Potter.
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    6th December 2011, 5:55 PM
    Weltall Wrote:And also use a font that isn't obviously Harry Potter.
    DAMN! I was hoping you wouldn't notice.. I couldn't decide on a font I liked, so my mind drifted off to Harry Potter. Only Hormine was pleasuring me, but Hagred was watching while he munched on some veggies.. Only he had a really happy look on his face.. Yea, my mind creeps me out to..
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