The Etoven Student Film Thred

[etoven]

I have a few films I did I wanted to share. (Stream is Quicktime optimized for high speed) (Sorry 56K) :(

http://tovensolutions.tovennet.net/media...almart.mov

http://tovensolutions.tovennet.net/media...20fuck.mov

[lazyfatbum]

Okay. Vegas Video is prosumer but it is NOT A TOY :D

I just saw them both, first the walfart one. You seriously need to spice it up with something. Add some captions or something, try to tell some kind of story. The attacking smile was great. Throwing in some captions of what the people are doing with a freeze frame would be great. "This guy wants to find Swamp Thing on DVD..." "here's someone fucking with my camera..." etc

WTF is indeed just that, I think it would be funnier if you remove the graphic of the robotic rabbit and the dialogue of "what the fuck" so that it's just you walking down the hall way and staring at the floor, but that's just my opinion.

It's also a good idea that when you make your titles, let them stay up as long as it would take a person to read them. In other words, dont have titles as long as your film. :)

You should also check on your audio compression. try boosting some of the higher frequencies and see if the sound effects can be somewhere in the minus of the dialogue but just above your room tone. Some stereo mixing wouldn't be a bad touch either. Just simple pans, you dont need 5.1 cross hatches or something.

The most simple rule is that whatever you put on the final edit before you render, look it over and ask yourself "what will people be thinking when they watch this?". Then it's just a matter of finding the right images and sounds to make them think what you want.

Not a bad effort though overall.

[deanna]

wow...your such a smarty pants, lazy!! ;)

anyways I don't get either one of them :hmm:

[etoven]

I Have Created Another Film. It's an add to TCFORUMS. See who's avitars you can find.

http://tovensolutions.tovennet.net/media...20city.mov

[OB1]

Heh, pretty neat. It should be "A Tovensolutions Production" though. :D

[deanna]

i seen me...:|

[etoven]

I worked on an opening sequence that I am thinking about turning into a mini series. It involves real actors interacting in cartoon shaded 3d worlds.

View The Sequence Here (Broadband Version About 6Megs):

http://tovensolutions.tovennet.net/toven...render.wmv

[Great Rumbler]

That's kind of neat I guess.

[geoboy]

I expect a lightsaber duel movie on my desk by tomorrow morning!

[etoven]

I expect a lightsaber duel movie on my desk by tomorrow morning!

I actually would not be advert to working on such a project.... :)
*In idea forms an Etovens head, I nead stars wars episode III, a yoda actionfigure, ewen mccgreggor, and fourty really hot girls.*

Searsly though I'll see what I can do ;)

Oww, and by the way the IP address thing in your signature is cute...

Now tell me the IP of microsofts main web server!
*Performs Ober Hack**** ow wait its: [207.46.130.108]

My trick is cooler!:p

[etoven]

Hay I changed my origianal 3d animation check out the new version:[indent]http://tovensolutions.tovennet.net/downl...render.wmv



Same Link As The Old One......


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[etoven]

I have finally finished the opening sequence for a new 3D animated series I am working on!

Enjoy!

[HI RES Version] - Broadband
[LO RES Version] - Dial Up