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Any feedback about this would be appreciated.. I'm not sure I like the colors.
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Made some revisions to the Video..

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Second video looks better.
I agree, the second one is better.
I like it, though I'd shorten it to make it more succinct. Also, I don't know if this is an optical illusion or what, but those gears look like they're pausing every so often. Still, good work.

And yeah, the 2nd one is better.
You should synchronize the speed of the gears to the sound of the revving engine.

And also use a font that isn't obviously Harry Potter.
Weltall Wrote:And also use a font that isn't obviously Harry Potter.
DAMN! I was hoping you wouldn't notice.. I couldn't decide on a font I liked, so my mind drifted off to Harry Potter. Only Hormine was pleasuring me, but Hagred was watching while he munched on some veggies.. Only he had a really happy look on his face.. Yea, my mind creeps me out to..