Book One of the Martian Empire Trilogy is COMPLETE. That doesn't mean that I won't come back and fix some stuff later on, but no more chapters will be added and the story presented is not likely to change any. In other words, it's finished. This is the story as I want it to be. It is full and complete. So, go read it. RIGHT NOW.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/1889956/1/
I'll take a run through it later tonight, WHICH IS MORE RESPECT THAN MY WRITING GETS AROUND HERE!
*Points accusingly around TC*
You know who you all are.
Jerks.
I don't like reading pages of fiction on the internet. Leisure reading should be reserved for some place comfortable and far away from a computer, like the bed, recliner, or toilet.
That's what a laptop is for. Duh.
It's still annoying. It's easier on the eyes, imo, to be looking at a page with a front light instead of a back light (not that a front light would solve the computer problem). Besides, you can't curl up with a laptop in bed to help you sleep without worrying about falling asleep and knocking it over when you toss and turn.
I agree, but the only way you're going to read my story [at least in the foreseeable future], is by reading it online.
Well, shucks. :(
Only kidding. For what it's worth, you seem like you'd be a good writer.
Sacred Jellybean Wrote:It's still annoying. It's easier on the eyes, imo, to be looking at a page with a front light instead of a back light (not that a front light would solve the computer problem). Besides, you can't curl up with a laptop in bed to help you sleep without worrying about falling asleep and knocking it over when you toss and turn.
You know you could print out D's book and read it.
*plays the "that's obvious song" with musical butt cheeks.
*Hint.... It's a polka, and German, and stinky.... :)
If he printed out my story, it would be over 200 pages.
I got four chapters in some time ago and, I dunno, got distracted. Guess having a definitive version available is a good reason to start again.
There's at least one thing that I still want to change in the last chapter of the first book, but other than that it's more or less done.
Book 2 now has 5 chapters in it. Why not read them, for Great Justice?
You guys didn't read that chapter for Great Justice, did you? I'm very dissapointed.
Anyway, now that summer is now in full-swing, I've been able to get back to writing and have begun again on going through the Book 2 re-edit. Eleven chapters are up now, so go read it.
Shit I just ate molded cheese! I hope I don't get sick
By the way, Ruins of a Forgotten Earth is more or less finished. Now that doesn't mean that I won't come back later and tighten some things up and do some editing, but all the story elements are in place.
So go read it, okay?