Tendo City

My first story on FictionPress:


http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=2142873

Everybody leave reviews there... and be honest!


gratz


Boris "Darunia" Grishenko

I'll read it a bit later, although I'm admittedly a bit confused by your taking Boris' name...

It was Gris<b>j</b>enko by the way.

That was actually pretty funny.

Heh, I'm a sucker for random humor. Well done, friend.

Next time have the salesman visit someone who builds model cannons and then the sparks will fly.